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    what can i say....my writing is BACK....heres two more

    Hey

    I dont know what happened, but my ability to write is back in full swing. ive written around ten new songs, in the past week alone. Here are two more for ya. Id love to hear what you guys think.
    You have alot of catching up to do.

    scott


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    BIOGRAPHY

    She's working on an article
    She wants to know what I really think
    There's places where words disappear
    All the pens she had ran out of ink
    Now there's just a bunch of empty space
    Looking for a new contributor
    I don't think I'd be much help
    I've never written anything before

    From somewhere deep inside of her
    I start writing down everything I see
    Working on her article
    I find that there's a whole biography

    I open up pages from her past
    To understand where she's at today
    I show her all these scribble marks
    What people wrote and tried to wash away
    All those things she tried to erase
    If only she kept them written out
    Even if it hurts, she'd know
    All the pens she had did not wear out

    From somewhere deep inside of her
    I've been writing down everything I see
    Working on her article
    I find that there's a whole biography

    Somewhere deep inside of her
    There's pictures of my family
    Right there in the middle of the page
    The page that I wrote about me
    A page in her biography


    Scott Roth
    November 1, 2002

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    BEST MAN

    I got a friend who's getting married soon
    He wanted me to hold the ring
    I've been looking everywhere for a gift
    For someone who has everything

    I gave up and just went home
    Saw an empty box by the bed
    I wrapped it up and threw on top
    A card that simply said

    "Here's a little something that
    Will make you a better man"
    He opens up the box, sees nothing inside,
    And says "I dont understand"

    "Well my friend there's nothing I can give,
    That could make you a better man.
    See, I might've held the rings tonight,
    But you were the best man."

    Instrumental Break

    "Here's a little something that
    Will make you a better man"
    He opens up the box, sees nothing inside,
    And says "I dont understand"

    "Well my friend there's nothing I can give,
    That could make you a better man.
    See, I might've held the rings tonight,
    But you were the best man."

    I might've held the ring tonight
    But you were the best man."


    Scott Roth
    November 1, 2002

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    Scott, you always amaze me!

    Again those are real great poems.

    IŽll read the other, too. Promised!

    It would be a lost not to do.

    Keep it coming!

    Very touching!

    Take care!

    Maddy
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    Some of God's greatest gifts are unanswered prayers
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    Our lives are better left to chance
    I could have missed the pain
    But I'd of had to miss the dance
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    I'll never reach my destination
    If I never try
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    We shall be free
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    Where your road leads I will follow!
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    I liked the first one all right but the second one just blew me away!! The way you wrote "Best Man" is so resounding and true! God bless you buddy

    Vanessa

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    scott

    Great, Scott! Writing never goes away, so, don't stop!
    Karyn
    Karyn Hughes
    khakidoodle@attbi.com

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    welcome back!
    take care,

    lil'bit

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    Wow...love em man. Great job. Now if only I could get going again. I need to find a spark or something. Anyway...great to see you posting again.
    The only way to learn is through failure, and the only true failure is not attempting to learn.
    -Nuff Said

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