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GarthLVR88
01-07-2001, 11:57 AM
Well heck, sometimes it's easy to turn your feelings about someone or something into a song. I've found that a couple of times, isn't hasn't been too hard! But this...was the hardest thing ever. Still not perfect...not a song. But I'll give it a shot anyway! So..."Give me everythin' ya got..alright?"
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<br>From A Distance
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<br>Standing next to you in a crowded room
<br>I’m thousands of miles away from reality
<br>As my mind drifts further away from this place
<br>I see you as only a stranger would see
<br>On the street corner, our eyes may never meet
<br>But I watch you, and anticipate your every move
<br>I struggle to read your thoughts, as one could do
<br>Feeling as if our minds are one, me and you
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<br>Though we’ve never so much as met
<br>I feel closer to you than anyone in my life
<br>The humble words in your songs
<br>Diminish my worries and strife
<br>If only I could tell you these things
<br>I firmly believe my life would change…in an instant
<br>But for now, I’ll continue to hold you with my eyes
<br>Only knowing you…from a distance.
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<br>I know, there are so many of us…we’re hard to tell apart
<br>But way you are with us, how you make us feel
<br>Giving each of us something to remember… to cherish
<br>Just a few things that make you so personable…and so real.
<br>Through the best times and the worst
<br>You’ve always kept your gracious smile
<br>It’s what brought me here in the first place…
<br>And I’ll never leave…even if you do, for a little while
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<br>And it’s hard to explain, but I’ll try to help you see
<br>What the reasons are, for your not meeting me
<br>I’m petrified of what might happen if our paths ever cross
<br>Would we meet again? If not, I would be lost.
<br>All this time, my reason for being is you
<br>And if the meeting is the climax…what’s left to look forward to?
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<br>If only we could tell you these things…
<br>Try and make you understand
<br>That in the eyes of us Believers
<br>You’re more than just a man…
<br>Lucky ones who met you, will revere their tales
<br>To those who haven’t gotten their chance…
<br>And maybe it’s because of these fears they never will
<br>But they’ll always believe…only… from a distance.
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<br>© 2001 Rachel Cope
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<br>Thanks!
<br>RachN

Chris Gaines
01-07-2001, 12:02 PM
Rach,
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<br>I already told you this is awesome :)
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<br>*grin* what more ya need.. Steph's stamp of approval?
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<br>I think you'll get that plus many many others :):)
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<br>nice Rach really nice ;)
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<br>JasonN

AlwaysaGBFan
01-07-2001, 05:29 PM
I LOVE it...well you probably knew I'd say that but I really do! Keep up the good work and I wanna hear some more now! :)
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<br>AllenN

major tom
01-07-2001, 05:55 PM
Wonderful song, Rachel. Straight from the heart. :) :)
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<br>KirstyN

kjsyong
01-08-2001, 07:31 PM
i couldnt have say better..
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<br>you have said it all out, and that's what we all feel!!!! great one!! beautiful piece...
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<br>keep it coming!!
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<br>Kel. :)N

MDgarthgirl
01-09-2001, 06:14 PM
*dips stamp in ink, pounds it onto the poem*
<br>There ya go, lol.
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<br>Rach, ya know it doesn't need my stamp, as Jason put it, cuz it's awesome and it's from the heart. That's all you need.
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<br>But if it could even possibly make you feel better, I love it! It's prime, grade A, beauty in words! :)
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<br>Keep it up and I'll talk to you later!
<br>NashN

Pilgrim
01-13-2001, 02:16 PM
Great song Rachel:) You are still talented eventhough you don't post that many songs here anymore;)
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<br>Keep up the damn good work:)
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<br>BrianN

Vanessa
01-13-2001, 02:22 PM
Vey very nice poem Rachel!! :) You have lots of talent, please keep up the work and keep postin 'em here at PG!! :)
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<br>Vanessa :)N