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writegerl
01-06-2001, 07:55 PM
Hey every one.
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<br>Could you help me out on this one? Let me know what you think? Help me smooth out the roughness, if it's worth savin? I'm a liitle new at this.
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<br>Cowboys make the best lovers
<br>when they don't leave you all alone
<br>Chasin' after golden buckles
<br>in cities far from home
<br>When he's not busy bustin' broncs,
<br>he'll show you tender care,
<br>but he'll break your heart in a minute
<br>to go ridin god knows where
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<br>He'll swear up and down he loves you
<br>And god knows it ain't a lie,
<br>but there's something 'bout a rodeo
<br>that'll always change his mind
<br>He'll leave ya cryin,
<br>hop in his pickup truck,
<br>but he'll be back a winner
<br>if you've got any luck
<br>He'll pick you up by the waist,
<br>twirl you in the air,
<br>He'll point to the bedroom door
<br>and say 'Let's celebrate in there.
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<br>'Cause, you know
<br>Cowboys make the best lovers
<br>when they don't leave you all alone
<br>Chasin' after golden buckles
<br>in cities far from home
<br>When he's not busy bustin' broncs,
<br>he'll show you tender care,
<br>but he'll break your heart in a minute
<br>to go ridin anywhere
<br>
<br>Copyright 2001 Crystal Frazer
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<br>Thanks,
<br>:)
<br>Crystal
<br>N

MDgarthgirl
01-07-2001, 05:49 PM
Wow, cool! I really like the direction of this. :)
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<br>Two questions...who's the inspiration and where I can find him?? LOL ;)
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<br>Seriously, though, I can't see anything that needs fixing. It's hard from my point of view since I can't "hear" it. But, I think it's definitely a keeper. :)
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<br>NashN

kjsyong
01-08-2001, 06:14 PM
Crystal you know??
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<br>you're fabulous with this piece...
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<br>you wont happen to have a demo on this do you.. kind of reflecting one of the song by GB too.. :)
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<br>what was that name again?? something to do with rodeo...
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<br>anyway, keep it up Crystal!! yeeeHA!!!
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<br>Kel.N