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kjsyong
12-18-2000, 12:19 AM
hi all, thought i let you all have a read at this too...
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<br>i hope it didnt come too draft.... :)
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Snowflakes fall, drifting in air peacefully.
<br>Forming a pool of white powder pond.
<br>Slowly becomes a blanket of white snow field.
<br>Covering from the east to the west of the horizon.
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<br>Sitting by the warmth giving fireplace.
<br>Peacefully decorating the Christmas tree.
<br>Holding up the Christmas believes and miracles.
<br>Have a great family reunion by the proud standing tree.
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<br>Presents and gifts sat around the tree base.
<br>Children and youngs crying joyously for Christmas cheers.
<br>Adults and elders gathered to keep the family traditions.
<br>Joy and laughter spread across the whole wide house.
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<br>Joy and peace,
<br>Love and remembrance, tears and happiness.
<br>Wishes and hopes, prayers and answers.
<br>Promises and believes.
<br>And a great Merry Christmas.
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<br> 2000 Kelvin Yong
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<br>hope you all enjoy it. :)
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<br>Kel.<P>(This message has been edited by kjsyong)N

jlm1
12-18-2000, 06:23 AM
Beautiful sentiment, Kel! Hope everyone's holiday is as peaceful and warm as the one you've created here!
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<br>:) JennyN

SueMc
12-18-2000, 08:13 AM
That's lovely Kel. It brings some great images to mind - have you written a melody?
<br>Sue :)N

kjsyong
12-18-2000, 08:55 AM
Sorry SueMc,
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<br>I am not that capable yet to create a tune/melody this piece (or any other piece or writing :P)
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<br>perhaps someone had the idea? :) then we can pass it on to Jason to sing it :) hehehee
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<br>anyway, glad you all pictured the beautiful christmas.. one thing though, down south in NZ, we dont get snow in big sunny summer season. :P
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<br>Merry Christmas Everyone!! :)
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<br>Kel.N

kjsyong
12-18-2000, 08:57 AM
Jenny, i am sure everyone will find peace at this wonderful, anything-can-happen christmas season :)
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<br>Have a joyful, Merry Christmas time there... enjoy and be thankful!! :) :P ;)
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<br>Kel.N

SueMc
12-18-2000, 09:23 AM
I didn't spend Christmas in New Zealand Kel, I was just passing through, but have wonderful memories of a beach Christmas in Australia. If you go down to the beach, wish us joy in our very wet England, and have fun.
<br>Sue :)N

Pilgrim
12-18-2000, 01:59 PM
Hey Kel:):)
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<br>That is great:):) Very cool:)
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<br>brianN

MDgarthgirl
12-19-2000, 01:13 AM
Very nice imagery ya got there, Kel. I can just see a certain family gathered 'round their tree. ;) :)
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<br>Nice Job.:)
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<br>NashN