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Wendi5000
12-03-2000, 04:13 PM
i wrote this song for a friend - never shared it before but wondering what anyone else thinks of it. please be honest & don't worry about hurting my feelings :)
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<br><center>Crown Of Thorns</center>
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<br>An angels face, a heart of gold;
<br>Tears in your eyes from pain untold.
<br>What is this pain that makes you cry?
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<br>One cold, dark night inside your home;
<br>He stole your crown to make his own.
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<br>Losing this your world stood still;
<br>They say life goes on but
<br>You can't see how it ever will.
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<br>Behind your smile, forgotten dreams;
<br>A desperate plan that gave you wings.
<br>What made this pain that made you die?
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<br>These clouds, this rain, someday will pass,
<br>And in your heart there's peace at last.
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<br>Losing you my world stood still;
<br>They say life goes on but
<br>I don't know if i ever will.
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<br>Forget the pain of asking why;
<br>Forget the pain that makes me cry.
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<br>Losing you my world stood still;
<br>They say life goes on and
<br>Now I know somehow it will.<P>(This message has been edited by Wendi5000)N

RckyMtnGirl@hrt
12-03-2000, 05:14 PM
Wendy,
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<br>This is very beautiful. All the more
<br>so because you wrote it for a friend.
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<br>Thank you for sharing it here.:)
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<br>CCN

Lowland_Kid
12-04-2000, 01:08 AM
This songs is giving me goosebumps all over... Beautiful!
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<br>MarjolijnN

BlueVelvet
12-04-2000, 04:03 AM
this is beautiful
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<br>I love the images that you use.
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<br>love and hot chocolate
<br>BV
<br>N

MDgarthgirl
12-04-2000, 01:28 PM
Your friend is very lucky to have someone like you, Wendi.
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<br>I love your intense words that don't hide the message at all. :) Nice Job.
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<br>NashN

major tom
12-04-2000, 01:55 PM
Great song, Wendi. Very emotional. I especially like the following lines. :)
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These clouds, this rain, someday will pass,
<br>And in your heart there's peace at last.
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<br>KirstyN

Wendi5000
12-04-2000, 02:49 PM
Nash,
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<br>*Was* lucky... I wrote the song for her after she died :) But thanks.
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<br>And thank you everyone for your kind words... this is the first time I have had the courage to share this with anyone. I am still not sure what I plan to do with it. One part of me would like to try to sell it to a singer who could do it justice, and another part of me feels like it is too intensly private to have it sold to the world... And then on the other hand, if I did decide to sell it, what makes me think that anyone would buy it? I know nothing about the business...
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<br>:)Wendi N

Pilgrim
12-07-2000, 02:16 PM
WOW!! Great song Wendi:):) Very cool:)
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<br>I didn't know you wrote songs:eek:
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<br>BrianN

Wendi5000
02-01-2001, 02:32 PM
I don't, exactly. I've written a few other things but they're way too personal to share; for some reason it occured to me to consider making a song out of this... whatever happens I guess :)N