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RckyMtnGirl@hrt
11-23-2000, 03:14 PM
The closest thing to lyrics that I can write is poetry
<br>and tonight I felt like writing. So, I hope no one minds.... Thanks :) CC
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<br>Possession
<br>
<br>
<br>Eyes once clouded by amber haze
<br>now see clearly.
<br>
<br>In mine lie your unfulfilled dreams,
<br>While yours hold the secrets of my heart.
<br>
<br>We take possession.
<br>
<br>Our eyes mirror the past,
<br>childhood connections.
<br>
<br>Your youth was mine.
<br>A bond forged of mutual pain,
<br>disillusion, betrayal and shame,
<br>forgiveness and healing.
<br>
<br>We take possession.
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<br>This commonality, once a burden,
<br>now makes us strong.
<br>
<br>This strength we'll pass on
<br>as a legacy of hope.
<br>
<br>For love...
<br>
<br>We take possession.<P>(This message has been edited by RckyMtnGirl@hrt)N

major tom
11-23-2000, 03:18 PM
That is really beautiful. :) :) "Eyes once clouded by amber haze" <-- I love that line. :)
<br>
<br>Kirsty
<br>N

nelty
11-23-2000, 03:48 PM
Kristy beats me to it...
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<br>it's beautiful and WELCOME BACK.... lol...
<br>
<br>NellyN

RckyMtnGirl@hrt
11-24-2000, 03:59 PM
Thank you Kirsty and Nelly :)
<br>
<br>So glad to be back :)
<br>
<br>CCN

MDgarthgirl
11-24-2000, 05:42 PM
Sometimes poetry and lyrics are one in the same, CC.
<br>
<br>But this one is a nice credit to poetry. :) It creates more thoughts and images in fewer words. Nicely done.
<br>
<br>Nash
<br>
<br>N

nelty
11-24-2000, 05:46 PM
You are most welcome CC...
<br>
<br>NellyN

BlueVelvet
11-26-2000, 07:07 AM
this is beautiful.....i write poetry too...there isn't a huge difference between it and a song.
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<br>lovely poem
<br>
<br>love and hotchocolate
<br>BV
<br>N

BlueVelvet
11-26-2000, 07:08 AM
this is beautiful.....i write poetry too...there isn't a huge difference between it and a song.
<br>
<br>lovely poem
<br>
<br>love and hotchocolate
<br>BV
<br>N

Pilgrim
11-26-2000, 12:15 PM
Beautiful poem CC:):):)
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<br>very very cool:):)
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<br>Brian:):)N