Here she comes

[nelty]

Oh no, here comes the twister again
<br>And she don't look too happy
<br>Look at that hideous, dark clouds
<br>And there is no shelter near by
<br>where to go, what to do
<br>
<br>The sky was clear and bright
<br>Then it changed instantly
<br>Enough to fall on your knees
<br>And beg for mercy
<br>But no word came out right
<br>
<br>Her thunder voice roared fiercely
<br>Giving the warning to stay away
<br>Always too late to run for cover
<br>Never enough to get ready
<br>But face the faith she has in mind
<br>
<br>Her lighting touch follows suit
<br>It never fail to hurt when strike
<br>Leaving a mark to remember
<br>There is no begging for mercy
<br>As she wouldn't know what it is
<br>
<br>Unpredictable as we declare
<br>Untouchable as we found out
<br>Unreachable as we have known
<br>Un-negotiable for a sunny day
<br>Until someone knows how
<br>To put a stop to this madness
<br>
<br>Every time the sky is calm and shining
<br>There is wonder when she will hit again
<br>And when she does strike once more
<br>You question how long will it be
<br>And how much she will eat this time
<br>
<br>The purpose of a twister
<br>Have yet to be discovered
<br>And no way to determine
<br>For no one have entered
<br>The mind of a twister
<br>
<br>There's nothing you can do
<br>That will change her appetite
<br>When the twister have lifted
<br>There's pieces everywhere
<br>Until you stand up to her
<br>
<br>Remember...
<br>The question is not
<br>will she but when
<br>
<br>By Nelly
<br>
<br>Enjoy:)<P>(This message has been edited by nelty)N

[Pilgrim]

very cool song Nelly:)
<br>
<br>Thanks for sharing:)
<br>
<br>BrianN

[major tom]

Very descriptive, especially the fifth verse. :)
<br>
<br>KirstyN

[nelty]

Just wondering...
<br>
<br>I hope you know that I am NOT writing about the twister.. but something else.
<br>
<br>NellyN

[Hawk7lte]

Nelly -
<br>
<br>Of course this poem is good. It could be descriptive of a lot of things from divorce to death to the twisting words and emotional devastation so typical of gossip or prejudism as it spreads. Some period of great emotional turmoil - the "storm" we all dread - anger, anxiety, depression - combined perhaps.
<br>
<br>And I wonder - why a "she"?
<br>What specifically did you have in mind (if it isn't more than you want to say)?
<br>
<br>Hawk N

[nelty]

Hi Hawk
<br>
<br>It's a she cause in my case it's a she and in this case I see it as uncontrol-able anger. That was what I was going for anyways. but it's nice if it have other meanings too.
<br>
<br>thanks you.
<br>
<br>Nelly
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[Hawk7lte]

Uncontrollable anger - perfect representation.
<br>
<br>But tain't the way ah see anger for you - you channeled it into something productive and creative; excellent controls I'd say.
<br>
<br>:)
<br>HawkN

[nelty]

Hi Hawk..
<br>
<br>just so you know. I wasn't talking about myself. :)
<br>
<br>NellyN

[Hawk7lte]

Oh good - someone else hun? Oh well, at least most people like that wear themselves out soon - kinda like tornados in that way too. :)
<br>
<br>Thought that didn't sound like you atall.
<br>
<br>HawkN

[littlebit]

Very cool Nelly. :) Thanks for sharing!
<br>
<br>deAnnalynnN

[nelty]

your welome....
<br>
<br>Hawk..
<br>
<br>lol.. oh no.. I'm not the twister.... :)glad we clear up that part.
<br>
<br>NellyN

[Chris Gaines]

Jason <--Nelly's Twister... always was.. always will be.
<br>
<br>LOL
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>JasonN

[nelty]

Jas...
<br>
<br>you know that pic of Chris that you have on your aol IM a while ago.. with that middle part blured out... lol Just kidding... ( now now, don't explode on me now)
<br>
<br>just so you know...
<br>
<br>NO ONE will be Nelly's twister will EVER BE
<br>
<br>Nelly
<br>N

[Chris Gaines]

LOL Nelly!!!!
<br>
<br>Too bad you can't say what um "Chris" was doin'!
<br>
<br>hehe
<br>Jason
<br>N

[nelty]

Jas...
<br>
<br>Chris was on national TV. on NBC.. I think we ALL know what he did.. lol...
<br>
<br>NellyN