Eye so Blue

[littlebit]

Tommy here's a repost of the song. For all you newcomers, i had this for 4 years and never showed it to anyone. Then i joined PG and everyone encouraged me to give it a shot. Now, i'm a semi-finalist in a national poetry contest and they are going to publish my song in poem form and give me the copywrite. So just remember, "Choose the chance the rapids and dare to dance that tide"
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<br>Eyes so Blue
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<br>Eyes so blue
<br>Like an open prarie sky
<br>A smile so sweet,
<br>Like a long slow country mile
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<br>It's in the way you move,
<br>the music of your laugh,
<br>The warmth that's in your voice
<br>Eyes so blue
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<br>A space in time,
<br>is captured in a photograph
<br>A day i know,
<br>i'm not likely to forget
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<br>You could have walked away,
<br>You didn't have to stay
<br>The kindness that you gave,
<br>Lives in my heart today
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<br>Eyes so blue
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<br>And even if our path's should never
<br>chance to cross again,
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<br>In my heart and in my thoughts
<br>you will remain, my friend
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<br>My eyes so blue.
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<br>{c}2000
<br>deAnnalynn Davis-Rice
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<br>this is dedicated to James Garver and Garth Brooks, which is who this song is about.
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<br>thanks for asking to see again.
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<br>take care,
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<br>deAnnalynn
<br>N

[RedHotRyder]

Great job on the song!!! Looks like a hit to me (as if my opinion counts for anything). Did you ever write down the music to go with that? That'd be nice to see, I wonder what it sounds like.N

[littlebit]

Thank you. :) Actually i had the tune in my head (and their eyes in my heart) :P Looking at the picture of me and James the words just came out. Funny how it works that way sometimes. i kinda got a guitar part for it and i'm trying to work in some quiet fiddle. i swear everytime i see a bright blue sky it reminds me of Garth's and James's eyes. :) if you want the chords or anything email me at deAnnalynn@chrisgaines.zzn.com. okey? And thanks again. :)
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<br>take care,
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<br>deAnnalynn<P>(This message has been edited by littlebit)N

[Pilgrim]

Excellent song deAnnalynn:):):)
<br>Very very cool job:)
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<br>Brian:):):)N

[major tom]

Great song deAnnalynn. :) :)
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<br>KirstyN