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GarthLVR88
09-06-2000, 01:46 PM
If you've talked to me online lately..You know what's wrong with me! LOL. I know the songs I've written lately were a little..uhh..well, not so up-tempo! With the exception of "I'd Rather Be". LOL! This one kinda reflects what's been going on in my "teenage blues" life lately, ha, but not the ending..k? Be sure to "Give me everything you've got, alright?" It's appreciated! :)
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<br>Let Go
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<br>You clasp your hands and hit the ground
<br>After five long years of being dragged around
<br>By the only man that you had ever loved…
<br>A hollow cry escapes your lips
<br>The salty tears on your fingertips
<br>Eyes to the sky, praying to the heavens above…
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<br>It hits you in the morning the moment you rise
<br>Pictures of him forever imprinted in your mind
<br>Never knew the sadness he would bring
<br>Thought you’d be together, joined by a ring
<br>You thought wrong, ‘cause girl, it ain’t so
<br>He’s gone. Out of reach…Got to let go.
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<br>A lump in your throat at the sound of his name
<br>A broken heart, aching from never-ending pain
<br>Going completely out of your mind…
<br>The smell of his cologne still lingers on the air
<br>Reminding you of times when he was there
<br>Questions of how one could ever be so blind…
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<br>Bridge:
<br>He said that you two could
<br>Last forever and he would
<br>Love you ‘til, the day that he dies
<br>You thought what you’d found was
<br>That infamous river of love
<br>But it was only a stream of lies
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<br>You awake to find you can’t take anymore
<br>Get up and walk through the bathroom door
<br>And you notice the bottle of pills by the sink…
<br>You clench the bottle with all of your might
<br>Say a prayer and look up into the light
<br>Take them and fall into an eternal sleep…
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<br>It used to hit you in the morning, the moment that you’d rise
<br>Pictures of him with you, stayed imprinted in your mind
<br>But you never knew the sadness he would bring
<br>Thought you’d be together, forever, joined by a ring
<br>You thought wrong, as the tombstone now shows
<br>You’re gone. Out of reach…Just couldn’t let go.
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<br>© 2000 Rachel Cope
<br>N

Pilgrim
09-06-2000, 01:53 PM
Very cool song Rachel:):):)
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<br>Good job:):)
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<br>BrianN

AlwaysaGBFan
09-06-2000, 03:31 PM
WOW Rachel...that one took me by surprise!...now I'm upset that you haven't shown me this one!!!! I bet Mr. Burton will be upset to! I'll be sure and show it to him when he gets back from Richmond. Well it's really good and I'll look forward to talkin to ya soon.
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<br>AllenN

GarthLVR88
09-07-2000, 01:11 PM
Brian,
<br>Short and sweet...;) Thanks for the smilies bud! And the great compliments. :)
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<br>Allen,
<br>*makes a sour face* You big baby! ;) If it makes you feel any better...This one is pretty much BRAND NEW..We'll pretend that's why you haven't seen it! Even though you have been REALLY busy lately...:) I'm glad it struck some kind of chord with you! Surprise...That's awesome! Thanks for the compliments! And as for "Mr. Burton" ;)...I'm SO sorry! LOL, I haven't talked to "you" lately either. If by chance you read this...I'm watchin' yah! And you keep getting better..I'm lookin' for a win out of you soon!
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<br>Thanks again everyone!
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<br>Rachel!!!!!!! :rolleyes:N

AlwaysaGBFan
09-10-2000, 04:29 PM
Rachel
<br> Well Allen told me I had to get on here and read this song. I'm not very good at this computer stuff and I lost Allen's password so I had to make my own name(MrBurton) but I couldn't get it to work so I'm finally here! The song is Great! It took me by surprise too. And thanks for the support. We all did really good this weekend. Keep up the good work and go for your dreams.
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<br>Best Wishes
<br>Ward
<br>N

major tom
09-14-2000, 07:06 AM
Rachel
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<br>Very powerful, emotional song :) :cool:
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<br>KirstyN

littlebit
09-17-2000, 06:31 PM
Oh man Rachel, this is a great song!!! :cool::)
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<br>deAnnalynnN