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MDgarthgirl
08-15-2000, 05:28 PM
Hey y'all!
<br>I was thinking about how some of the new artists have "broken in" with a heartfelt ballad that doesn't necessarily focus on a monogamous romantic relationship, i.e. Brad Paisley and Clay Davidson. (I know Brad's "HDHTB" is not his first single, but it certainly gave him a boost.) So, I was talking about this to a good friend and, forgive me, I literally said, "I should get me one of those." LOL *Doh!* I'm young, it's okay..I'll learn.
<br>Point being...I tried my hand at it and this is what I got. Whether you like it or not, please feel free to tell me what you think. :)
<br>
<br>Related By Love
<br>© 2000 by Stephanie Shade
<br>
<br>It's been 7 years since they carried him home
<br>So soft, so small, and left all alone
<br>He's the pride and joy of the two who saved him
<br>Opened their home and asked to raise him
<br>
<br>(One night) The boy asked his dad why they don’t look the same
<br>If they’re father and son and share a last name
<br>He smiled and said, "You were a gift from above
<br>And despite our looks, we’re related by love"
<br>
<br>...And to the world is born
<br>another family
<br>Though the pieces don’t match
<br>The picture’s complete
<br>Just ask the proud father
<br>Nothing can set them apart
<br>Take a single look and see...
<br>He has his daddy's heart
<br>
<br>A few houses down in a new nursery
<br>Smiling, watching her fall asleep
<br>Thankful to find her in such a big world
<br>Are the mother and father of one baby girl
<br>
<br>And faster than time, the little girl grew
<br>She hugs her mom tightly in front of the school
<br>Her friend was there, laughing about how people say
<br>"I look more like my momma everyday"
<br>
<br>So the girl asked her mom why they don’t look the same
<br>If they’re mother and daughter and share a last name
<br>She smiled and said, "You were a gift from above
<br>And despite our looks, we’re related by love"
<br>
<br>...And to the world is born
<br>another family
<br>Though the pieces don’t match
<br>The picture’s complete
<br>Just ask the proud mother
<br>Nothing can set them apart
<br>Take a single look and see...
<br>She has her momma's heart
<br>
<br>"Thanks for your time",
<br>Nash
<br>
<br>N

major tom
08-16-2000, 05:30 AM
Nash
<br>
<br>Absolutely beautiful lyrics :) :)
<br>
<br>My favourite lines are:
<br>
<br>He smiled and said, "You were a gift from above
<br>And despite our looks, we’re related by love"
<br>
<br>
<br>Take a single look and see...
<br>He has his daddy's heart
<br>
<br>Great song :)
<br>
<br>Kirsty
<br>
<br>
<br>N

Pilgrim
08-16-2000, 03:47 PM
I have to agree with Kirsty:):)
<br>
<br>Excellent and beautiful song :):)
<br>
<br>THANKS!!
<br>
<br>BrianN

MDgarthgirl
08-25-2000, 01:46 PM
Thanks for your thoughts, Kirsty and Brian. :)
<br>
<br>I really wish I could get out a melody for this one. I'd love to see how far it could go with the right music. :)
<br>
<br>NashN

GarthLVR88
08-25-2000, 09:56 PM
Nash!
<br>Oh gosh..please excuse my stupidity and lateness! I could've SWORN I replied to this topic, don't hate me! ;) This song...It's your breakout song. Or WILL be your breakout song in the near future! When you tossed the idea of the "adopted kid" on me..I loved it! And seeing it in final, PERFECT, Stephanie FORM..:), it couldn't be any better! Thanks again for helpin' me out..I don't think I'd be doin' a lot of this stuff if it wasn't for you! You'd better talk to me soon! I'm goin' crazy! :)
<br>
<br>Rachel!!!!!!! :rolleyes:
<br>"Nash Jr." <--does it fit? ;)N

MDgarthgirl
08-26-2000, 04:12 PM
LOL...yeah, I guess it fits. I still think I'm a little young to have a kid, though. ;)
<br>
<br>Thanks for the reply, Rach. Took you long enough! *scoff* ...Just playin. I actually thought since you had read it before, maybe that "counted." ..or something, LOL. I don't know. But thanks for comin through! :)
<br>
<br>We'll talk soon, I'm sure! I've actually newsworthy tales to tell...muhahahaha! Email me a time you're free, and I'll meet you...or try my hardest to. :)
<br>
<br>NashN

MtnGirlCrazy4Garth
09-03-2001, 03:38 PM
Oh My Gosh!!! :) :cool: :D

Nash, I know this is a REALLY OLD thread, but I was just reading through some of your posts, looking for one of your stories, and when I read the words to this song:

:) :) WOW!!! :) :)

Girl, this is an AWESOME song, and I just KNOW that someday we're gonna be hearing this one on the radio!!!

WOW!!!

:cool: :cool: :cool:

ImaGBbeliever
09-04-2001, 05:49 PM
The world's gonna beat down your door to hear more of this song... just wait til they get a taste!
You're gifted, girl, there is no doubt about it!! :eek: :D :eek:

wow wow wow!

Kristi

littlebit
09-08-2001, 02:48 AM
Wow!!!!!

Very moving song,

:cool: