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MDgarthgirl
08-01-2000, 02:48 PM
Hey y'all. I wrote this one a couple of days ago. It's not sad, lol...it would go with a upbeat tempo. And now that I think about it, a better title might be "When You're Out Of My Sight". Anyway, this kinda reminds me of Martina McBride's sound...or even Trisha Yearwood's new one ("Where Are You Now?"). Hope you enjoy!
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<br>You’re Out Of My Sight
<br>© 2000 Stephanie Shade
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<br>Sitting in traffic
<br>Five o’clock world
<br>Praying for the grace of a green light
<br>to let me make my turn
<br>
<br>My mind is spinning
<br>As I remember
<br>You said you needed some time
<br>Before you pledged "forever"
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<br>But when you’re out of my sight…
<br>I’m out of my mind
<br>You said you’d be back
<br>Well, you’re certainly taking your sweet time
<br>Baby, don’t you know my world shines
<br>When I can watch you look into my eyes
<br>But you’re out of my sight…
<br>And I’m going out of my mind
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<br>It’s finally Friday
<br>My patience is gone
<br>I’ve waited all week for this day to come
<br>Did it have to take so long?
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<br>(bridge)
<br>What’s the reason for such anticipation?
<br>Why do I act this way?
<br>I can only think of one desire
<br>That has me praying it never fades
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<br>When you’re out of my sight…
<br>I’m out of my mind
<br>You said you’d be back
<br>Well, you’re certainly taking your sweet time
<br>Baby, don’t you know my world shines
<br>When I can watch you look into my eyes
<br>But you’re out of my sight…
<br>And I’m going out of my mind
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<br>"Thanks for your time",
<br>Nash
<br>N

GarthLVR88
08-01-2000, 03:11 PM
*puts on mom's potholder gloves before typing* Oww! That's hot! ;) I can TOTALLY hear this one playing in my head....now if I could just get my guitar to cooperate! Hang on, I'm gonna go get my grandma so she can clap for you in a MOST unusual way! brb....Okay, she's right here. You know that flab underneath grandmas arms that just never seems to want to stop floppin' back and forth? Well...I'm making her smack the flabbies together! It actually sounds like she's clapping! Okay, I don't know where that came from..I think I'M going out of my mind...but clearly Nash, you are not! This song rocks! Sorry for the weirdness! But you get the message! :)
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<br>Rachel!!!!!!! :rolleyes:N

littlebit
08-02-2000, 11:49 AM
Nash,
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<br>Another great one! Girl you amaze me. i could practically hear the melody and background music. Berry, Berry Hot!!:cool::):)
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<br>can't wait to hear more,:)
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<br>deAnnalynnN

Pilgrim
08-02-2000, 03:29 PM
GREAT song again Nash;);):):):)
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<br>Very cool:) I would LOVE to hear it on the radio:):)
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<br>BrianN

no1cowgirl
08-06-2000, 02:13 PM
Nash-
<br> Awesome girl! :) Ya make me wanna work with ya more and more everyday! *LOL* Good job.
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<br>KristaN

MDgarthgirl
08-08-2000, 12:14 PM
As always, y'all provide just what I like to hear, LOL. Thanks SO much for the feedback. If anyone has any suggestions, please don't hesitate to throw those in, too. Gotta learn how to take it, right?
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<br>Rachel...ya need to lay off the sugar, k? LOL But, thanks for your..um..unique response. :):cool::)
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<br>Nash
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<br>N

major tom
08-09-2000, 08:43 AM
It is a great song Nash :) :)
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<br>KirstyN