"Eyes so blue"

[littlebit]

Okey, i'm real nervous about this. At a friend's suggestion i'm doing this. it was written 4 years ago. i never showed this till now. "Give me all y'got"
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<br>Eyes so blue
<br>like an open prarie sky
<br>A smile so sweet
<br>like a long slow country mile,
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<br>It's in the way you move
<br>The music of your laugh
<br>The warmth that's in your voice,
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<br>Eyes so blue
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<br>A space in time
<br>is captured in a photograph,
<br>A day i know
<br>that i'm not likely to forget
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<br>You could have walked away
<br>You didn't have to stay
<br>The kindess that you gave
<br>Lives in my heart today
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<br>Eye's so blue
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<br>And even if our path's
<br>should never chance to cross again
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<br>In my heart and in my thoughts
<br>you will remain, my friend
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<br>Eyes so blue
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<br>deAnnalynnN

[GarthLVR88]

"Very cool"! By any chance...was this written about Garth? Heh, who else could have "eyes so blue"? ;) If you have anymore, we'd love to see 'em! Thanks for postin'.
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<br>Rachel!!!!!!! :rolleyes:N

[littlebit]

It's the first time i've ever tried to write like this. :eek: Actually it was written the day after i met James Garver. :cool: i met Garth about 6 months later. :cool: But it speaks for both of them. Garth and James have the most brightest beautiful blue eyes i've ever seen. :): And the rest of them ain't bad either. :P: (i usually don't like blue eyed guys, but once again they changed my mind.) Their pictures just don't do them justice. Thanks. i'm glad you liked it. :cool: yeah, there's more, but i have to get my nerve up to post 'em. :eek: i wrote one for the whole band, but it's a pirate song. (Fer the motley crew what stole m'heart! damn their eyes!) :): Thanks for the feedback. i was so nervous about posting it. I really like what everyone else has posted. You guys can really write! :cool:
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<br>deAnnalynnN

[CaptMorgan]

Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
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<br>Personally - I think it's great!
<br>You really have a way with words and I hope there's lots more where this one came from.
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<br>Bring them on - don't be shy. :)
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<br>Catch y'all around the next bend...N

[MDgarthgirl]

I could have Sworn I had replied to this song...*shrug*
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<br>Anyway, I echo the sentiments of CaptMorgan and GarthLVR88. The metaphors and imagery are great! :)
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<br>...Now ya got me all thinkin' about Garth...Sigh...*shaking head to snap out of it*
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<br>Hope to hear more! (of course, it IS competition, I dunno why I'm encouraging it. ;) Just kiddin')
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<br>Good luck with your career!
<br>Nash<P>(This message has been edited by MDgarthgirl)N

[MissScarlett]

That was great! Made me think of Garth too :) :cool:
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<br>MargaretN

[Hawk7lte]

Nice going Littlebit;
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<br>I like the comparisons you make;
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<br>Littlebit wrote;
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<br>"Eyes so blue
<br>like an open prarie sky
<br>A smile so sweet
<br>like a long slow country mile"
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<br>Excellent. I could hear someone singing that.
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<br>How sweet it is....
<br>HawkN

[major tom]

There are some beautiful lines in that song :)
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<br>KirstyN

[fuzzwuzz]

Makes me smile!N

[Pilgrim]

This is a very cool song:):):)
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<br>Thanks a lot for sharing this awesome dong:):)
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<br>BrianN