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GarthLVR88
06-24-2000, 11:41 AM
Hey PGers! Long time no...talk. Well, I've been out of circulation for a while, but it's given me a LOT of time to write. This is one I wrote just a few days ago, I hope you like it. :)
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<br>Without A Trace
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<br>As days go by, no one seems to notice
<br>The large piece of me thatís gone
<br>I sit alone, no oneís there
<br>But something keeps me holding on
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<br>I feel weak, and I know whatís wrong
<br>As Iím left here sitting, singing our song
<br>I tried everything, and still youíre no where to be found
<br>I canít help but notice, my tears on the ground
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<br>You just disappeared, from the face of the earth
<br>Didnít think about me, left me lying here, hurt
<br>You were so selfish, yet I love you still
<br>I need you back, for that hole to be filled
<br>Iíve searched for you, everywhere, every place

MDgarthgirl
06-24-2000, 11:47 AM
*POW!!* <-- As long as you're using puns, I figured I could use this one to say how your lyrics hit me, lol.
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<br>Even when it looks like there's no room for it, One still improves. :)
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<br>Very good job, Rach.
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<br>Talk to you soon,
<br>NashN

Chris Gaines
06-24-2000, 01:01 PM
Rach,
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<br>awesome :)
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<br>Nice enterance back in the forums hehe
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<br>JasonN

AlwaysaGBFan
06-24-2000, 02:14 PM
Hey this is Allen....VERY NICE!!!! I didn't end like I thought it was but it's very cool!
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<br>AllenN

Pilgrim
06-24-2000, 02:53 PM
Really really cool Rachel:):)
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<br>Welcome back:):)
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<br>BrianN

nelty
06-24-2000, 04:44 PM
Welcome back and WOW.... Great Poem. :-)
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<br>nellyN

rightnow777
07-11-2000, 07:13 PM
this one is one of my favorites keep going he's still proud of you and so am I
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<br> love,
<br> meN