New Song idea...should I continue with it?

[MDgarthgirl]

Hey y'all. I know long time, no read...if anyone's been waiting, lol..I apologize. <P>When Garth signed my book, he told me to write from the soul. Well, right now my soul's pretty depressed. Besides feeling empathy for Garth and what's he's going through, I just got home from my first year of college and I miss my "second family." I'm just in a place where I wish everything was different, but was still the same. (That made sense in my head...really). Anyhoo, among all these feelings, here's what I've got out. It's the darkest I've ever wrote...mmm, correction. Darkest I've ever posted and I'd like to know if it's worthy of completion. Thank You.<P>(Title not thought of yet)<P><I>(possible verse or bridge)</I><BR>Your memory <BR>keeps calling me<BR>back into my cell<BR>As I lay me down<BR>inside the walls <BR>I’ve come to know so well<P><I>(Chorus)</I><BR>I’m tired of always hurtin’<BR>I’m weak from all this pain<BR>I’m tired of turning circles <BR>only to see your face again<BR>You say you want me to take you back <BR>but there’s something you should know<BR>I can’t begin to miss you<BR>until you leave me…<BR>leave me alone.<P>© 2000 by Stephanie Shade<P>Thanks for your time,<BR>Nash<BR>N

[honky]

Nash,<P>Whew,.. sounds like you had a bad time...LOL<P>This one is different, but it would be cool to see how you finish this one.<P><BR>Maybe the lady in this song could find her real self...<P><BR>TommyN

[AlwaysaGBFan]

Very Cool Nash!<BR>It's definetly a deep song...I wanna hear the end and some more songs though!!!!!<P>AllenN

[Pilgrim]

One word.......<P><B>C O N T I N U E ! ! !</B> :D :D :D<P>BrianN

[PCL]

WHOA<P>Im going through the same. I just graduated in April, and now living back home after two years. Im SECOND-HOME SICK.<P>I've been trying to put it in words, but nothing has been coming to mind.<P><B><BR>"Im tired of spinning in circles<BR>Just to see your face again"<BR></B><P>GREAT LINE!!!<P>ScottN

[MDgarthgirl]

Thanks for the encouraging compliments, everybody. :D :D :D<BR>I've gotten it to a rough draft and I'd love to hear what you think now. :)<P><B>Scott</B><BR>Good Luck with finding words to express what you're feeling. I know with your talent, it'll come when it's ready. :)<P>NashN