Wade22
03-16-2000, 02:55 PM
this is a pretty short one and it's still needs work but i really liked the idea behind it b/c it's autobiographical and really vented all the negative feelings i was having at the time. tell me what you think and give me some suggestions. <P>You're goin out with him tonight<BR>I know from the sorry excuse you had<BR>if it's one thing i got it's plain sight<BR> but go ahead and have your fun <BR>and cry to me tomorrow<BR>when he's up and gone before the sun<BR>i'll be here and i'll be kind<BR>i'll dry your tears<BR>and pretend i'm blind<BR>but tonight i really will see<BR>that you're with him<BR>even though you're better off with me<P>go out and paint the town<BR>runnin' 'round with him<BR>before he let's you down<BR>it wouldn't be the first time<BR>and i know it won't be the last<BR>and i know that you'll never<BR>be able to leave him in the past<BR>you think i don't see<BR>but it's you that's blind<BR>'cause it's plain to see that<BR> you're better off with me<P>you'll be smilin’ tomorrow night<BR>but this mornin’ you came back cryin’<BR>but it's ok 'cause ‘til then i'll hold you tight<BR>you can keep on hurtin’ me but let me tell you<BR>if he keeps on hurtin’ you then i'll break his arms<BR>his legs and a rib or two<BR>it don't matter who started it<BR>you're the one i love<BR>and i hate to see you throw a fit<BR>i know you're just mine to borrow<BR>til the sun goes down again<BR>and i won't see you tomorrow<P>go out and paint the town<BR>runnin' 'round with him<BR>before he let's you down<BR>it wouldn't be the first time<BR>and i know it won't be the last<BR>and i know that you'll never<BR>be able to leave him in the past<BR>you think i don't see<BR>but it's you that's blind<BR>'cause it's plain to see that<BR> you're better off with me<P>go out and paint the town<BR>runnin' 'round with him<BR>before he let's you down<BR>it wouldn't be the first time<BR>and i know it won't be the last<BR>and i know that you'll never<BR>be able to leave him in the past<BR>you think i don't see<BR>but it's you that's blind<BR>'cause it's plain to see that<BR> you're better off with me<P>©2000 Jeremy S. Wade<BR>N