need some honest opinion

[Wade22]

This will be the first song of mine I've posted here, I've written a lot of stuff, even completed some of it. This has by far gotten the best response from the friends I've shown it to. I know the verses need some work but I'm very happy with the chorus. I'm still working on some music I plan to have a soulfull guitar solo around the bride in there that i'm currently playing around with. I really haven't decided how the tempo should be, i think it would work as a slow song tell me what you think. thanx and it's called "Chance"<P>You’ve got that look <BR>I can see it in your eye<BR>You’ve seen her <BR>And you’re gonna give it a try<BR>Before you go wastin’ <BR>All your precious time<BR>Let me give you fair warning<BR>About a heartbreak of mine<P>Don’t try and get close to her<BR>Believe me you don’t have a chance<BR>She’s got another man on her mind<BR>And I don’t think she wants to dance<BR>Don’t buy her roses and ask again<BR>I gave her my world and all<BR>I am is her best friend<P>I know how you’re feelin’<BR>I been there before<BR>You just want to get<BR>Her on the dance floor<BR>But I know all to well<BR>The mood she’s in<BR>You and me are here<BR>But she’s thinkin’ of him<P><BR>Don’t try and get close to her<BR>Believe me you don’t have a chance<BR>She’s got another man on her mind<BR>And I don’t think she wants to dance<BR>Don’t buy her roses and ask again<BR>I gave her my world and all<BR>I am is her best friend<P>Bridge:<BR>I know how bad you want her<BR>But whatever you’ve tried I’ve already done<BR>It’s just something about her<BR>But she’s latched on to that one<P>You’ve got that look <BR>I can see it in your eye<BR>You’ve seen her <BR>And you’re gonna give it a try<BR>Before you go wastin’ <BR>All your precious time<BR>Let me give you fair warning<BR>About a heartbreak of mine<P>Don’t try and get close to her<BR>Believe me you don’t have a chance<BR>She’s got another man on her mind<BR>And I don’t think she wants to dance<BR>Don’t buy her roses and ask again<BR>I gave her my world and all<BR>I am is her best friend<P>©2000<BR>Jeremy S. Wade<P>N

[Pilgrim]

<B>Jeremy</B><P>That is an awesome song :D :D :D<P>I wonder where you guys get all this talent from?? :) :) :) :)<P>Thanks ALOT for sharing your song :D :D<P>BrianN

[loreli]

Jeremy,<P>That is a GREAT song!!!<P>LoriN

[garthsgirl]

Jeremy, You have some talent. I love the lyrics. Thanks for the post.<BR> LisaN

[luvsgarth62]

Jeremy,<P>Cool song! I bet it'd sound even better with music :) Maybe you could show your song to Garth and both y'all could sing it :) <P>-AliciaN

[Wade22]

I'd like to thank all of yall for your positive feedback, it's very encouraging. It's difficult sharing work with people you've never met before. A lot of people that are close to me haven't even seen any of my songs or heard me play guitar. Most people wouldn't call me shy but when it comes to some things I am, and since music is something that's very important to me it's something that i'm a little shy about. Hopefully I'll have some more stuff sooner or later to put up herem thanks again and much love. N