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urbancountryboy
11-16-2003, 08:19 PM
Well...I am doing a project for english I thought I should share with you guys...plus you can help me out a bit. I wrote an Ode to Garth and i need help on the chronological order. If you can figure it out I would like to know where i put the wrong events in Garth's career...I did it all from memory so...Here it is P.S.also tell me what you think?

Ode To Garth Brooks

He is the one who stayed strong…
When everyone thought he was in wrong…
He wrote to show the love of his life…
Just how much he cared…

He broke down on stage…
In the beginning on the song…
The feeling of pity and uncomfort filled the air…

Even though he was crying…
He tried to start over and over…
The song he had written for her…

He forced his emotion back…
As the crowd cheered on…
He finished the song…

And as the song says…
“And as she walked away and I looked at my wife
And then and there I thanked the good Lord
For the gifts in my life.”

He gained back her trust…
She loved him now…
As she did before…
Before he was unfaithful…

He served his time in the public eye…
Pain and grief of the past tore them apart…
He was once again alone in the world…
No one but his millions of loyal fans…

He pressed on…
He met someone new…
Someone closer that could take her place…
The media tried to make people lose their faith in him…

Being all over now he is on his break…
Retired from the career he once knew…
Being a father to his kids…
But living on as a legend in our hearts…

Tony Allen
Please do not copy this..i ask of you?

tulsaok2003
11-16-2003, 11:19 PM
don't change anything, I like it. I am sure Garth would love it too if he read it. ;)

Rooster
11-17-2003, 10:56 AM
I might be wrong.... but wasn't he singing If Tomorrow Never Comes? Sorry. ;)

Krystal

OKGARTHFAN
11-17-2003, 04:11 PM
I might be wrong.... but wasn't he singing If Tomorrow Never Comes? Sorry. ;)

Krystal

Yes, he was. I watched the Inside Fame last night and he was talking about it.

Other than that I think its pretty cool!

Chris:)

urbancountryboy
11-17-2003, 07:18 PM
Thanks for correcting me....coulda swore it was "If Tomorrow Never Comes" but i was listening to Unanswered prayers. I am glad you corrected me...I will fix it and re-post.

Mysassy
11-17-2003, 10:28 PM
This is very nice! Thanks for sharing it with us!

urbancountryboy
11-18-2003, 06:07 PM
Ode To Garth Brooks

He is the one who stayed strong…
When everyone thought he was in wrong…
He wrote to show the love of his life…
Just how much he cared…

He broke down on stage…
In the beginning on the song…
The feeling of pity and uncomfort filled the air…

Even though he was crying…
He tried to start over and over…
The song he had written for her…

He forced his emotion back…
As the crowd cheered on…
He finished the song…

And as the song says…
“If tomorrow never comes
Will she know how much I loved her
Did I try in every way to show her every day
That she's my only one.”


He gained back her trust…
She loved him now…
As she did before…
Before he was unfaithful…

He served his time in the public eye…
Pain and grief of the past tore them apart…
He was once again alone in the world…
No one but his millions of loyal fans…

He pressed on…
He met someone new…
Someone closer that could take her place…
The media tried to make people lose their faith in him…

Being all over now he is on his break…
Retired from the career he once knew…
Being a father to his kids…
But living on as a legend in our hearts…

Tony Allen

Chris Gaines
11-18-2003, 07:18 PM
only thing I see is you have to give credit to Kent Blazy & Garth Brooks, as you are using lyrics to their song.. in yours. :)

cool job though :)