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littlebit
12-17-2001, 05:33 PM
from the dreams i've had when i do sleep. can never quite remember them when i wake up, only know the feeling i wake up with is a good one. Sometimes i can remember bits and pieces of them during the day. i guess they'd be labeled Sweet Dreams and maybe that's what this should be called.

Anyway, as usual give me all ye got.

Wishful Dreaming

All this time
And all those nights
i thought it was
Wishful Dreaming

But i look
into your eyes, i realize
it might be more than
Wishful thinking

The moonlite rides
on horseback
Gentle whispers
in the dark

Two souls
intermingling
slow dancing
under the stars

Your smile
Your voice
And gentle touch
let me know,

i belong with you
But i don't
know what
to do

Wanting to
let you know
But afraid
to let it show

Afraid you
might say, yes
More scared
that you'll say no

i don't know where
to go from here
i only know whats
in my heart for you

You'll never
know how much you said
Without saying
a word,

But, i heard.


2001 deAnnalynn Rice
used by permission only.

Marga
12-19-2001, 02:31 PM
my heart still beats since i've read it......

I love the words used here:

Afraid you
might say, yes
More scared
that you'll say no


What a great work!!!!


Marga;)

littlebit
12-20-2001, 10:16 PM
:o thanks Marga :) it's kinda uneven, like the dreams, kinda like a puzzle. not all the pieces are in place yet. :)

Vanessa
12-20-2001, 10:54 PM
Tjose pieces of that puzzle seemed to fit right in place for me!! :) You're a wonderful writer littlebit!! **HUGS** :)

vanessa :)

no_fences80
12-23-2001, 10:22 PM
There`s a song by Sarah Mclachlan(?) that have almost the same line... "so afraid to love you, but I`m more afraid to lose" Love that line... that`s kinda where I`ve been all my life...

Loved your poem!! have u written more??

no_fences

littlebit
12-31-2001, 08:07 PM
Thanks Vanessa,

girl, your a sweetheart

hi no fences, :)

i'm kinda there too right now. i written some, but they aint as good as some of the others that post their songs and stuff.

you should read some of Nash's stuff. It's ALOT better! :)

Vanessa
12-31-2001, 10:24 PM
You're very welcome littlebbit..you're a w sweetheart as well :) :)

deAnnalyn- we're all special and unique in our own way.. we all have a certain light that shines around us, ya know?? And I think that you're showing this light to each of us.. and that's very brave (cause it's hard to shine when life gets ys down) and also very :cool: **HUGS**

Vanessa :)

wizard2C
12-31-2001, 11:58 PM
Hi!

Littlebit....that is a lovely poem. :)

carol
wizard2C
"Dance!Sing!Fun!2002!"

littlebit
01-02-2002, 12:22 AM
Vanessa,

cos of ya'll i'm learning to hang in there. Cos of the light ya'll shine here.

thanks Carol, i'm glad you liked it.

nofences80,

these two girls right here are pretty good writers too. :)