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Triple J
11-04-2001, 10:19 AM
I have been writing this song so long now for someone special ;) , i don't know where to begin to tell you all about it. There has been no help from anyone on this song so it's still rough around the edges.

It's all about the way we feel when in love, for when we feel frightened to show the someone that you love just how much you love them. For when you can't explain it to the someone that you love just how much you love them. And just to show the soemone you love that little bit more of just how much you love them.


Dancin' That Dance (We All Know So Well)


i'm reaching out to you,
reaching out with my hand,
i can feel you there my love,
i can see you there my love,
and i know your love is true,

Like two love birds,
this could be what we dream of,
and i can sense your love,
when i hear your voice,
and read all your words,

(Bridge)
it's to prove our love my love,
the only way we'll ever tell,
let's get out there and start that dance,
the dance we all know so well,

(chorus)
so we're dancin' the dance,
well within the fire,
so let's give it all a chance now,
and give in to all that we desire,

yeah, it's in the way,
the way that you're holding me,
yeah, it's in the way,
the way that you're getting through to me,
yeah, we're dancin' the dance,
dancin' the dance to show what we can never say,

so it's to prove our my love,
it's the only way we'll ever tell,
let's get out there and start that dance,
the dance we all know so well,

(chorus)

yeah, now i'm dancin' the dance,
well within the fire,
my worries are all swept away,
as i can feel all of what you desire,

yeah, i'm dancin' the dance,
well within that fire........

Jesse Corling c.2001




well, i don't know how well it looks or sounds but there you have my first ever written song. Please feel free to give hints and suggestions for it, and i hope to oneday work out a melody for it too......;)

This song was written to you Marga, my love. It's another way for me to say i love you and i'll always love you forever. I know you are in so much pain right now my love, and it makes me so sad about it all because i never want you to feel sad or pain.:(
My only wish right now is for you to be better my love. :(


I love you now and forever Marga
Jess

Jude
11-04-2001, 03:15 PM
Nice sentiment


Jude

Marga
11-05-2001, 11:41 AM
My love, I've just sent you a pm and now I feel I just need to send you one more...;)


Marga:)

Triple J
11-05-2001, 04:03 PM
;)

i got your pm my love, and i just replied to it too.........;););)


Jesse:D

MyownGB
11-06-2001, 11:24 AM
i got your pm my love, and i just replied to it too.........


I haven't recieved your pm:( :p he he he but I have Margi's paswoord and could read it!!!!!!:p <----just wanna make you laugh bro ya know my pm's box is not working fine.


It's a beautifule song you wrote and i know you'll do very fine morw works with an inspiration as my sister is.


Dani

Triple J
11-06-2001, 02:29 PM
Dani, your sister is the best inspiration i'll ever have. She makes it all so special in so many ways.


:o:o

i hope you haven't been reading all our private messages.....

they are sortta pretty private some of them........

:o:o


Jesse:o

Marga
11-09-2001, 10:36 AM
This man is so silly you don't have to worry our m's are saved and i'm the only one who has read the more privates;)



Marga:)

Triple J
11-09-2001, 11:06 AM
*wipes sweat from brow*

phewwwww!!!!!

that's alright then......:o ;)


Jesse;)