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sebroski
10-18-2001, 03:49 AM
Jesse mentioned that i wrote songs some time ago and i was a little shy to share them with ya'all as my songs are a private thing to me but as i spilled my guts out all over the open forum about my "Pie Story" lol i decided to share the song i wrote about that night.
Thin Threads by Anthony Seabrook

It was by a little thin thread that took me there that night
But i am glad i got there.
It was by a little thin thread that i drove you home that night
You and your girlfriends
It was by a little thin thread that we held each others hand
out in the moonlight
It was by a little thin thread that kissed each deep
and it felt oh so right
and i was smitten, Like a kitten and a little thin thread.

One man one woman they meet and then become as one
There is no logic to it thats just how its done
Makes you wonder why the whole world don't fall in love
But i think its something to do with the big guy above
You can't stop her once fate she takes control
Because you know that she has trumps on your soul
And we were smitten, like two kittens and a little thin thread

Tis a country song of course and i'll leave it there as the next verse is even more personal and prolly not PG nuff said.
HeHe i hope you enjoyed it in written form anyway wish i could record it for ya'all it sounds better then it reads prolly.

Marga
10-18-2001, 05:34 AM
Anthony very very :cool:

I enjoyed a lot reding it.



Makes you wonder why the whole world don't fall in love


I often think the same thing too...


Marga:)

Triple J
10-18-2001, 07:01 AM
:D


glad to see you finally stopped singing it to yourself and posted it...

now to get some more of them songs ya sing outta ya...hehehehe....:)


/btw i think ya sang this one while we were gaming late one night there.......LOL.....:)

very good song still Sebo :D


Jesse

sebroski
10-18-2001, 10:07 AM
Thanks guys, really, your replies mean alot to me :)
Ok Ok Triple i give in and since you did your love peotry i guess its my turn to throw myself at the whim of the Gods of fools,heroes and lovers HeHe :p
v1

Here is a few verses from a song i wrote about Life in general.
Got the Time?
Now I look before me and never behind
Don't trust your eyes they can be blind
Now Time she's a constant
Straight down the line
And you can't buy it back my friends
When you've spent your last Dime

chorus

I now live my life sober
Though i've been drunk along the way
But it's not all over
Till you pay hey yeah
Till you pay yeah yeah

v2

Now i aint one for fashion
Or bright City lights
Revolving door people
With revolving door lives
So get off your treadmill
Don't sit there and whine
Give in to all your hopes and your dreams
And buy back some time.

Chorus
I now live my life sober
Though i've been drunk along the way
But it's not all over
Till you pay hey yeah
Till you pay yeah yeah

Bridge

Before you can win
You have to lose sometimes
And if you lose
well it aint no crime
because you only lose
when you don't even, don't even
don't even try (adlib)
said..You gotta try At least try

alternate chorus

I have dreamed of the future.
Whilst dwelling on the past
Never realising, Never realising
Never realising that the here and the now
Was the place i was always meant to be yeah.

Marga
10-18-2001, 12:58 PM
Before you can win
You have to lose sometimes
And if you lose
well it aint no crime
because you only lose
when you don't even, don't even
don't even try (adlib)
said..You gotta try At least try




So much truth in those lines...:)
very :cool: Sebroski


Marga

Triple J
10-18-2001, 07:02 PM
Another very :cool: song Sebo,


i told ya your songs are good :)


keep 'em comin' cause i know you've got plenty of them that even i 'aint heard yet...

;)


Jesse

Pilgrim
10-23-2001, 08:31 AM
Nothing to worry about:)

Very very cool songs:cool:

Brian