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Triple J
09-22-2001, 09:12 AM
ok,

so I'm not real good with words, and I'm bad at writing songs too, but here's another poem I wrote....

(just remember that Garth was my inspiration for the way I've worded some of the poems! :cool: )

these poems are from my heart and mean something very special to me,

so please feel free to feel special to see some very private feelings here.

I'm not known to normally show any feelings publicly, but deep down I just gotta get them out someway and these poems are a way to express them privately.....



My Perfect Date With You


I knew it from the moment that I met you,
I felt that you could be the one,
The one that I would fall for,
And now, it's all said & done,

My heart had felt so hard and cold,
But my love for you is so warm & strong,
It will last forever always,
Forever as the heavens are long.

Watching the beautiful full moon rise,
We cuddle together sitting by the seaside,
I'm admiring all of your beauty,
& listening to your sensuous side,

As we gaze towards the heavens,
Sitting outside my beach front place,
I'm listening to all of which you tell me,
As I hold your hand to my face.

Through the soft ocean swells,
we're walking along the moonlit beach,
Arm in arm & hand in hand,
Never out of each others reach,

Now it's my turn to confess to you,
How my life has changed the first night we met,
& my love for you will always be strong and true.

You know Your fire & ice,
Your my sun & my moon,
You're a little crazy but You truly are nice,
Your all that I've ever wanted,
'Cause you fill my heart with love,
& now I'm glad for all the time I've spent,
All the time I've spent looking for your love.

My world that I've created for myself,
Has now been conquered by you,
I'll give you everything I have to give,
All my love that of which is pure & true,
I'm all yours forever & a day,
Nothing is going to hold me down,
Or hold my love for you away.

Now I've finished expressing my feelings,
I turn to you just to see,
But the frail light fails to show,
Just what you think of me,
Then you turn to me & for all my wishes,
Our hands touch & our lips meet,
& I'm weakened by your passionate kisses.

In the morning light of reason I realise,
You have been & always will be,
My one true love for all of time,
'Cause I'm now down to one knee,
& with the rising light from the sun,
Everything I had planned to do & say,
Has all been said & done.

I'll give you my heart, body & soul,
You wouldn't have from me, expected any less,
Let us from two halves of a heart,
Make just one whole,

And to you only, I'll give my pure devotion,
For this being my proposal speech,
You are now my whole world,
So let's not be out of each others reach.




I... :o ....
*staring at the floor*
I guess you could say I'm a bit lonely these days.....

but one day I may just get to express my feelings, it just doesn't seem like anytime soon.

littlebit
09-26-2001, 12:37 AM
WOW!

i like it just the way it is :cool:

Very beautiful images in my mind reading it.

Keep 'em coming ;)

Marga
09-27-2001, 09:42 AM
:cool: Can't say anything more.


Marga

Triple J
09-29-2001, 10:25 AM
ok, here's the third one....

(just remember again that Garth was my inspiration for the way I've worded some of the poems! All of his songs have a deep meaning to 'em :cool: )


My Love For You

I try to make a difference,
By leaving my mark,
I don't follow the flock of sheep,
I listen to my heart.

There's only one woman I'll give my heart to,
You're all that I ever wanted,
Your everything that I'll ever need,
And when I close my eyes, Lady
You're all I ever see.

Now, I'll just stand here for you to see,
I 'aint got too far to fall,
'Cause there's not much left of me.

But I've easily learnt,
Life is worth living so I'm taking it all the way,
And knowing I'm more than surviving,
Living it by the day.

So let me just say,
There 'aint nothin' I'd rather do,
And I mean anything,
Then to at least be with you.

The longer I wait for your love,
The further my restless soul stirs,
And yet you are as pure as an angel far above,
My desire for you grows,
For 'tis that of true love.



there's the third one, hope ya'll like it.

Pilgrim
10-01-2001, 04:05 AM
Wonderful poems Jesse:D:D:D

You have a real talent for this:cool: :cool: :cool:

Brian

Triple J
10-01-2001, 07:37 AM
:o

i feel i'm only a beginner at writing stuff, I never was good at english at school.

i dunno about talent, i never really considered myself talented at much....

MDgarthgirl
10-01-2001, 06:09 PM
Very nice, Jesse. Both poems give great images.

I like them.

Nash

Triple J
10-03-2001, 08:01 AM
thanks guys,

:o , i haven't really started on me forth but i know what it's gonna be about.

Triple J
10-04-2001, 10:39 AM
ok, so here's the fourth one,


*/btw I'm dedicating it to someone special ;) ,
and i'm not gonna say who it is either :p *



Loneliness

Tonight I feel my loneliness,
Raging throughout my heart,
The dread of being alone,
My chest begins to smart,

I can feel the cold wind blow,
Running through my hair,
I sit wrapped in my blanket,
Snuggled in my chair,

My heart begins to quicken,
For 'tis that I think I heard,
Your voice whispering to me,
But the wind made it sound unheard,

My heart slows down again,
For it was just the wind blowing,
Not that of your sweet voice,
That Iíd heard a whispering,

I raise my eyes to the heavens,
Towards that lonesome blue moon,
Suddenly I begin to remember,
Youíll be cominí here soon,

A smile begins across my face,
I think of the happiness youíll bring,
I begin to hum to a tune I know,
And then I begin to sing,

Itís a song nobody knows,
A song nobody has the words to,
A song that only I know how it goes,

I sing the song to the end,
And when the song is long through,
I begin to think about it then,
And realize it was all for you,

Youíve been in my thoughts,
Running through my mind,
Youíve been in my dreams,
Always so very kind,

Never once have I considered,
The distances between our homes,
I sit here and think about it,
But still my restless soul roams,

I once had a gap in my life,
Youíve filled up that space now,
I donít want to say it wrong,
But Iíll say it anyhow...

...I Love You.



I just wrote that in the last few days, i needed to somehow express it and i'll let ya'll here at Planet Garth see it first.

Marga
10-04-2001, 01:17 PM
Glups!!!!
It's the most beautiful I've ever read.


That one you wrotte the poem for would be so special for you.;) What a lucky one!:)

I only wish I can express my feelings in a poem as you've done.

As Brian said, you've got so much talent, not in the way the poem has been written but in the way you've found the words to mean what you feel.

:cool: :cool: Marga

Triple J
10-05-2001, 06:25 AM
i do what i can but it's very hard to word 'em right, that's why their very simple.

;)

i know you can marga, no matter how it looks or sounds, it's all about the meaning. :cool:

nelty
10-05-2001, 08:53 AM
Very nice Triple... :)

Nelly

Triple J
10-06-2001, 10:12 PM
thanks Nelly

i'm hoping to do some more soon, dunno when but.

sebroski
10-07-2001, 04:12 PM
Whoa Trip I like this artistic side Man :)
Keep up the good work !!!!!
You play computer games with a guy for a year and there you go there's a Cerano De Bergerac sitting right beside you and you never knew it !!
He He
But Seriously J keep it up man and BTW don't worry about being a novice to poem writing some of the best stuff ever written was written by those that are in love :):):)

Triple J
10-07-2001, 07:04 PM
for all those that don't know...

Mr. Sebroski here is a friend of mine that lives here in this town!!!

and dude, i didn't think i was going LANing with you to share poems, i thought we were there to do some serious gaming. :)

and who's this Cerano guy? never heard of him! :p

So when are ya gonna post some of your songs Sebroski?
i know you've got some there somewhere. :)

sebroski
10-08-2001, 02:39 AM
Cerano (if thats the correct spelling my bad if not) was a charachter from a play by shakespeare who had the heart of a poet but felt he lacked it in the looks department so he got a friend of his who was really good looking but stoopid and fed him lines to woo the girl that Cerano himself loved.
This play was depicted by hollywood also in the Steve Martin film Roxanne......There ya go i am just full of useless information LoL :):):)
And what sort of friend would i be to spam my lyrical efforts under yours brah I didn't wanna appear to be raining on your parade with my poor attempts :)
Oh and btw your right too, i guess there aint much time to share love poetry when you are shooting each others butts off in a nice, friendly game of Counter Strike hehe....
Stay Cool Stay alert ............

Triple J
10-08-2001, 06:48 AM
yeah.....ok.....so.....i still don't know who he is.

I only read "Romeo & Juliet" and "Hamlet". :)

and Sebo, just start a new thread for ya songs, i'm sure some of the guys here'll like 'em ;)

Pilgrim
10-10-2001, 07:29 AM
Very cool Loneliness poem Jesse:cool::cool:
I am impressed:cool:

Brian:D

Triple J
10-10-2001, 09:31 AM
Brian,

the truth is, i wrote that over two nights for Marga.

when i do another for you Marga, i'll post it here. ;)


Jesse<-----(very happy)
:D

MyownGB
10-10-2001, 11:23 AM
Ya know you've won my sister heart??
Well I supposed you already know it.

Dani.

Triple J
10-10-2001, 07:40 PM
:)

Pilgrim
10-11-2001, 03:44 AM
I kinda figured that out Jesse;)

I think it's sweet:D

Brian

MT4GB
10-11-2001, 09:43 AM
Jesse I say it again-those poems are wonderful! Please keep posting the ones that you are writing and sending to Marga! I am sure they have help her get through the rough times to but they also help the rest of your fellow garthnutts too!

Nancy

TracyByrdFan
10-11-2001, 12:20 PM
Hey I think you poams are very :cool:

Angela...:rolleyes:;):p

loreli
10-11-2001, 10:13 PM
Great Poems Jesse :)

So very sweet. :)

Lori