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nelty
07-21-2001, 08:32 PM
For all that Iíve mind
Iíve only hurt to torture them
So sorry I am for what Iíve done
I never meant for any harm

I try to think of what Iíve done
Did I regret what I did
Was it right to make the choice
Was it wrong to still be here

I have friends, lots of them
Wonder who be glad to hear
I donít know who to share this with
If I do speak, I wonder whoíll be left behind

Even if I sat you down
Thereís nothing much that you can do
Nor would you understand
Thereís reason why I kept you away
So be grateful and stay away

Appreciate all the help
But Iím not worth your pain
Donít try to give me a hand
In the end it will not worth your while

Copyright 2001 NT

nelty
10-04-2001, 03:34 PM
:confused: :confused:

Just curious why no one had anything to say about this one...

Was it that bad???

nelly

Marga
10-05-2001, 05:52 AM
Nelty I just read it right now and isn't bad.

It's nice but sad as a time.

keep on posting here!!

Marga

Triple J
10-05-2001, 06:41 AM
i only just got on again.

it's very good nelly

very sad too

i hope you keep posting them

:)

nelty
10-05-2001, 08:51 AM
Thanks Marga and Triple...

lol.. if you read all my writings... they are all sad... ;)

Nelly

Pilgrim
10-10-2001, 07:22 AM
It's good but also very sad:o

But I like it:)

Brian:D

Chief
10-10-2001, 07:27 AM
:o :( nelly... it's beautiful... very good!!

A+



oh and it is indeed quite sad :(

nelty
10-11-2001, 02:58 PM
Thanks Kel. Thanks Brian... :)

Nelly

Hawk7lte
10-11-2001, 05:37 PM
As usual for me; I wonder about the message(s).

Especially in this one. There are inconsistencies within the words.

So I wonder what was going on when you wrote this one Nelly?

Hawk

loreli
10-11-2001, 09:28 PM
Hmm...what happened to all the replies this thread had when you originally posted this??????????????????

Nelly there were lots of replies...I dunno what happened. :confused:

I still feel the same way about it. :)

Lori

nelty
10-11-2001, 09:40 PM
Lori..

I think you are talking about another poem.. I never post a poem twice... ;)

Hawk...

Nothing's going on... what would be??? :)

Nelly

loreli
10-11-2001, 10:02 PM
:rolleyes:

No Im really, really sure there were replies to this thread :p

Lori

Hawk7lte
10-11-2001, 10:58 PM
Why Nelly,

All poetry is stimulated by some (or someone's)reality.

Isn't it?

Hawk

nelty
10-11-2001, 11:21 PM
Hawk....

;)

Lori...

I tell ya... wrong poem... :p

Nelly

loreli
10-11-2001, 11:51 PM
No, No, No (oh boy...that reminds me of someone ;) )

It was this poem :p

Lori

nelty
10-12-2001, 09:41 AM
Remind you of who..

and no... it wasn't this poem.:p It can't be...

Nelly