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ldsgbgerl
07-02-2001, 10:00 AM
Here's something I wrote this morning. I haven't written in a while, so it may not be all that good, but let me know, ok? please??? :)

Well, they say the grass is greener
but is that really true?
They say I see through glasses
fogged by a pinkish hue.

They say I canít know
who it is I really love
They say there is no Mother
watching me from up above

They say the Heavens closed
by Johnís sealing hand
The words of God through Joseph,
they have no will to understand

They say itís me thatís crazy
and mock me every day
They say Iíve gotten lost
and will never find my way

Seems to me they do a lot of talking
fussing and carrying on
But before they know it
Judgement Dayíll be here and gone

Then Iíll be found a kneeling
in front of Godís Almighty Throne
and then for once Iíll know
I never stood alone.

Crystal

MDgarthgirl
07-05-2001, 09:55 AM
:D

"They"...do a lotta talkin'.
I like it. It reminds me of those plaques Hallmark, or what have you, makes with inspirational sayings. :)

And "dang skippy!" on the never standing alone. lol

Nice job.

Nash

littlebit
07-14-2001, 06:43 PM
Very nice Crystal! :)

Anonymous77
07-15-2001, 07:12 PM
Crystal... I liked it very much. I love the way you ended it, too...


:)