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kjsyong
04-18-2001, 11:25 AM
Something that came into my mind just before i am going to bed, and it's late but hey... i had to get this out.




He'll make it

He is thankful for every bit
of work that you poured out for him
Of course he noticed your love,
sure he cannot let his feeling go

Making a living, the way he wanted
No one has ever thought he can
but hey, he is making a history
of his own to tell, he'll do fine

It's hard but he will make it there
There's a lot more freedom than here
Sure he'll be much happier that way too
without a doubt he won't forget you

Sure, everyone doubted him for all
that he won't survive even another day
All alone in that single bed he has
sobbing through the soft moonlight

No doubt he will be alright again
with mouthful of cheers and smiles
hiding those shady red eyes away
wiping his lonesome tears with haste

He has to proof them all wrong
he wants to be a legend of his own
The only one of his kind at best
showing them there's no contest

It would only get even better
seeing the shocks and surprises
on their unbelieving pale faces
He knows he's their only best

It's hard but he will make it there
There's a lot more freedom than here
Sure he'll be much happier that way too
without a doubt he won't forget you


Chief

MDgarthgirl
04-27-2001, 03:31 PM
Gee, I wonder, to whom this is possibly about... ;)

Comforting words, Chief. :) Sort of a response to "She's Gonna Make It", nice to see the other side of the coin.

Ya know, ever since he matched his life to that song if it ever happened, I've hoped he's not listened to it. ;)
He Is going to make it.

Nash

kjsyong
04-27-2001, 06:54 PM
Thanks Nash...

It is about someone in real life, but he is doing fine. :) thank you for the comfort and assurance of the matter that things will be okay.

this piece has gone through some transformation, it's in the process of turning into a proper song with chords and tune.

We'll see how it go when it is done... but might need some work on it... :D :)

Triple J
10-09-2001, 09:03 AM
Kel,

this is a really great poem, i hope to see more of this from ya

littlebit
10-09-2001, 11:54 AM
Kel,

i'd love to hear the chords cos i love it. i hope whomever it was written about is doing okey now.

does remind me of a certain Cowboy tho :)

Triple J
10-10-2001, 06:59 AM
told ya people now would read it Kel

Chief
10-10-2001, 07:16 AM
hahahahaa Jesse.. :o you're so right :)



deAnn.. that person in it.... was me. *LOL* *LOL* :o :o

Pilgrim
10-10-2001, 07:50 AM
:cool::cool::cool:

What can I say?? It's awesome!!:D

Well done Kel,

Brian:D

Marga
10-10-2001, 07:57 AM
It's so beautiful Kel:)

Ya now you MUST COME AROUND HERE more often???


Marga;)

Chief
10-10-2001, 08:22 AM
aawww brian ... :o :o thank you ;)

Marga, hehee are you taking care of your health? let's worry about your health first, then we'll talk about me coming here. :) you take care alright?!!!

TracyByrdFan
10-11-2001, 12:33 PM
Very,Very,Very :cool:!!!

Angela ;):p

loreli
10-11-2001, 10:34 PM
You have a way with words Kel :)

Very nice :)

Lori