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Lowland_Kid
02-08-2001, 10:54 AM
But here's a song:
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<br>She says Bye hon', I gotta go
<br>but I'll be back in a minute or so
<br>No sign from the couch, did he hear?
<br>he's so grumpy when there's no beer
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<br>Tyres are screechin'
<br>there's no way of reachin'
<br>a happy ending here
<br>Anything can happen
<br>when a woman goes out
<br>to get a man his beer
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<br>It's a quick trip to the Walmart
<br>a couple of budweiser in too big a cart
<br>She's counting coins, just enough to pay
<br>nothing left for breakfast this way
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<br>Just a few blocks down an old ford starts
<br>a guy getting ready to break some hearts
<br>He hits the gas like he did his drinks
<br>too much of both for a man who thinks
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<br>Tyres are screechin'
<br>there's no way of reachin'
<br>a happy ending here
<br>Anything can happen
<br>when a woman goes out
<br>to get a man his beer
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<br>Sir says the cop it's about your wife
<br>he's thinking this guy's larger than life
<br>The news he doesn't really want to hear
<br>man, she's only getting him some beer
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<br>Tyres are screechin'
<br>there's no way of reachin'
<br>a happy ending here
<br>Anything can happen
<br>when a woman goes out
<br>to get a man his beer
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<br>February 2001
<br> Marjolijn Stefanoni
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<br>I am kinda happy with this one myself and would like to hear your thoughts :). Thanks!
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<br>MarjolijnN

Pilgrim
02-09-2001, 01:16 PM
It sucks:(:(
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<br>Got you there hehehehe;););)
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<br>I think it is great:) But also a bit sad I would say:eek:
<br>is it up to ourselves what happens with her in the end??:rolleyes:
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<br>I imagine it as if she pass away in an accident:eek:
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<br>Great song Marjolijn:):)
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<br>BrianN

Lowland_Kid
02-09-2001, 09:23 PM
You did get me, Brian! :( My heart was in my throat, I can tell you!
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<br>Glad you liked it anyway and yes, this one is a bit sad.
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<br>After I posted it here, I added another verse (or rather: a bridge), this is what it then looks like:
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<br>She says Bye hon', I gotta go
<br>but I'll be back in a minute or so
<br>No sign from the couch, did he hear?
<br>he's so grumpy when there's no beer
<br>
<br>Tyres are screechin'
<br>there's no way of reachin'
<br>a happy ending here
<br>Anything can happen
<br>when a woman goes out
<br>to get a man his beer
<br>
<br>It's a quick trip to the Walmart
<br>a couple of budweiser in too big a cart
<br>She's counting coins, just enough to pay
<br>nothing left for breakfast this way
<br>
<br>Just a few blocks down an old ford starts
<br>a guy getting ready to break some hearts
<br>He hits the gas like he did his drinks
<br>too much of both for a man who thinks
<br>
<br>Tyres are screechin'
<br>there's no way of reachin'
<br>a happy ending here
<br>Anything can happen
<br>when a woman goes out
<br>to get a man his beer
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<br>The ambulance arrives
<br>no life left to save
<br>all because this guy
<br>could not behave
<br>hearts will get broken
<br>that much he got right
<br>but he won't take no one home
<br>and someone's not getting his beer tonight
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<br>Sir says the cop it's about your wife
<br>he's thinking this guy's larger than life
<br>The news he doesn't really want to hear
<br>man, she's only getting him some beer
<br>
<br>Tyres are screechin'
<br>there's no way of reachin'
<br>a happy ending here
<br>Anything can happen
<br>when a woman goes out
<br>to get a man his beer
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<br>That makes it more clear what happened, don't you think?
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<br>:)
<br>Marjolijn
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<br>N

Pilgrim
02-10-2001, 12:38 AM
WOW!!! :):):)
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<br>That makes it even better Marjolijn:)
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<br>You also have talent for this songwriting stuff:):)
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<br>I really really like it:):)
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<br>Brian:)N

Lowland_Kid
02-11-2001, 01:24 AM
*beaming* Thanks Brian! :)
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<br>MarjolijnN

MDgarthgirl
02-12-2001, 06:28 PM
Woo... I know I'm not the only one who can TOTALLY see that play in your head. Just like a movie.
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<br>Hey, I love the line, "He hits the gas like he did his drinks." Works very smoothly. Nice Job. :)
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<br>Nash
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Lowland_Kid
02-21-2001, 11:46 AM
Thanks Nash, A compliment from you is a HUGE compliment!
Glad you liked it too! :)

Marjolijn