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writegerl
01-31-2001, 05:28 AM
Maybe......... Be Careful what You Pray For?????
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<br>If I could take just one quick glimpse behind
<br>the curtain pulled across my mortal eyes,
<br>would I find folly in this earthly guise
<br>and at my own existence laugh in kind?
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<br>Would knowing shame o'ertake my prideful heart?
<br>Would this remembrance be my temp'ral bane?
<br>Would I see at last each sin as profane
<br>and reject mercy Father would impart?
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<br>Could I not bear to look upon His face
<br>or bear to take his pure and gentle hand?
<br>Would I jeer myself off that perfect Stand
<br>and would Hell be my only worthy fate?
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<br>I would be sorry for my stolen glance;
<br>better off never given such a chance.
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<br>Copyright Crystal Frazer 2001, yada yadda yadda
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<br>So.....
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<br>What do ya think?????????N

Pilgrim
01-31-2001, 02:17 PM
I really liie this one:):)
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<br>Very cool:)
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<br>Thanks for sharing:)
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<br>brian:)N

MDgarthgirl
02-04-2001, 05:24 PM
wow..um.. *woosh!* *waves hand past head*
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<br>If I'm even close to thinking what it really means...
<br>I like it, lol. :) Pretty powerful subject.
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<br>Working that poetic license, too. Nice Job.
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<br>Nash
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<br>N

writegerl
02-05-2001, 08:23 AM
Thanks guys. I really apreciate all your comments.
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<br>:):):):)
<br>Crystal
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<br>PS Jason, it's been a long enough wait; time for you to weigh in :-pN